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Carmel, California

And Their Children After Them

Carmel, California, is introduced as the destination of a month-long summer visit that Simon is preparing to make with a family of psychologists. Though the novel gives no further description of the place, the trip becomes consequential before it begins: Simon’s decision to accept the opportunity means leaving his companions behind.

Setting and Planned Visit

The visit is presented as a trip to the West Coast of the United States, arranged well in advance for the summer. Julien, the oldest of Simon’s cousins, was originally meant to go, but a broken leg sustained while roller skating makes him unable to take the trip. Simon steps in instead. When he explains the arrangement, his departure is three days away and his bags are already packed.

Carmel’s Place in the Conflict

Simon considers the month in Carmel a rare opportunity and says he is sorry to be leaving. Steph responds by asking whether he is simply abandoning the group; Simon counters by asking what else she expects him to do. The exchange turns the planned visit into an immediate personal rupture: a destination Simon sees as worth taking becomes, for his companions, the reason he will not be there.

Narrative Significance

Carmel matters here as a promised elsewhere rather than as a fully depicted setting. The account centers on how the trip came about and what its announcement does to the group, not on the town itself or on what happens after Simon arrives. Its narrative weight lies in the contrast between the advance planning and practical readiness of the journey—Julien’s long-standing arrangement, Simon’s packed bags, and the three-day countdown—and the abruptness with which the news unsettles Steph.