Buffy After the Goodbye
Black Water (Joyce Carol Oates Edition)This flow traces the closeness and friction between Kelly Kelleher and Buffy St. John, from their college friendship to the separation at the party.
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Bearing strength in each event
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Roommates at Brown

An Established Friendship
Shared history
Kelly Kelleher and Buffy St. John are close friends from Brown University. Their friendship gives Kelly a familiar home and social circle on Grayling Island.
Different temperaments
Buffy is more worldly and openly confident about sex than Kelly. The differences create teasing and contrast without cancelling their affection.
A Weekend Invitation

Returning to the Cottage
A familiar welcome
Buffy St. John invites Kelly Kelleher to the family cottage for the holiday weekend. Kelly has visited many times and expects to remain there through Sunday.
A chance encounter
The visit brings Kelly into the gathering where she meets The Senator. Buffy’s invitation becomes the setting for a choice neither friend initially anticipates.
A Friend’s Observation

Buffy Notices the Connection
A knowing remark
Buffy St. John tells Kelly Kelleher that she and The Senator are getting along well. Kelly smiles, embarrassed by how accurately Buffy has noticed her reaction.
Warning beneath banter
Buffy also reminds Kelly that The Senator supported aid to the Contras. The remark combines teasing with a political warning, leaving its precise motive ambiguous.
The Farewell in the Driveway

A Friend Watches Them Go
An abrupt departure
Kelly Kelleher leaves the cottage with The Senator despite having planned to stay the weekend. Buffy St. John catches up, squeezes her hand, and asks her to call the next day.
A goodbye without explanation
Kelly cannot comfortably explain why she is leaving. The silence between friends is affectionate but strained by what both suspect and neither can readily say.
The Reunion Imagined

Love After Loss
An imagined confession
While trapped, Kelly Kelleher imagines surviving and embracing Buffy St. John, telling her that she loves her and regrets shutting her out.
A relationship left unfinished
The vision expresses the apology and affection Kelly cannot deliver in reality. Her friendship becomes part of the life she hopes to recover just before the story confirms her death.
During their college years
Before the Fourth of July
Late afternoon on the Fourth of July
Around 7:55 p.m. on the Fourth of July
In Kelly’s final imagined moments