The Cost of an Unreliable Plan
My Father's DragonThis flow traces the hazards built into Elmer’s plan and shows how each setback forces him to adapt without abandoning the rescue.
increasing
Bearing strength in each event
decreasing
A Secret Departure

Risk Chosen Early
Concealment
Elmer sneaks aboard without permission and hides among the cargo. Discovery could send him home before he begins the rescue.
A fragile plan
The secrecy enables the journey but leaves Elmer without adult help. Its success depends on improvisation at every later stage.
The Strange Grain Bag

Nearly Discovered
A close call
Sailors notice that Elmer’s grain bag looks lumpy. Their inspection risks revealing the boy inside.
Improvised recovery
A mistaken guess about dried corn saves him, but the passage is accidental rather than secure. Elmer must continue knowing that his disguise was fragile.
The Wrong Jungle Course

Navigation Fails
The misdirection
Elmer’s compass course takes him away from the river because it bends sharply. Dense foliage and swamp mud add to the difficulty.
A worsening position
A sensible method fails against unfamiliar terrain. Elmer’s detour brings him into encounters with dangerous animals before he reaches Baby Dragon.
The Pursuers Gather

Local Dangers Combine
Suspicion escalates
Wild Boars interpret the animals’ distractions as evidence of invasion and gather a crowd to defend Baby Dragon’s captivity.
The rescue endangered
Each individual escape has left a clue that strengthens the larger pursuit. Elmer’s immediate survival has produced a new collective threat.
The Unplanned Escape Route

Setback Becomes Advantage
The bridge changes
The Crocodiles abandon their place as a stable crossing and swim downstream with the pursuers aboard. Elmer has not controlled the turn, but it buys time.
Resolution through adaptation
The plan succeeds because Elmer can use an unintended event. His journey rewards flexible attention rather than perfect prediction.
the night Elmer boards the ship
during the unloading at Cranberry
after Elmer tries to follow the river
after the animal encounters on the trail
during the final rush across the river