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Palm Springs House on Toledo Avenue

The Shards

The Palm Springs House on Toledo Avenue is an aunt’s usually closed seasonal residence that Bret Ellis borrows during a weekend in 1981. Its role shifts from empty shelter to vantage point: from there, Bret travels to Susan Reynolds’s grandparents’ house, discovers Robert Mallory’s car outside, and follows the pair into town. After returning alone, he wakes to a darkened house and a dead telephone line, interprets the disturbance as a possible threat, and flees to Los Angeles before dawn. The house’s isolation makes it both a temporary refuge and the stage for Bret’s escalating suspicion.

Seasonal House and Arrival

Bret calls his aunt in San Francisco to ask permission to stay at the Palm Springs house for the weekend. She agrees, explains where the key is hidden, and warns that the property has been closed since early May and has not been aired out since the previous week. The house will not be opened for the season until late October. Bret accepts its unused condition and plans a short visit, intending to leave his cat Shingy enough food and water for his absence.

He drives from Los Angeles on Saturday afternoon, speeding across the freeways without knowing what he expects to find. The Palm Springs welcome sign interrupts his daze; by dusk, he has reached the house and found the key beneath a terra-cotta pot beside the entrance. The threshold leads into a dark, musty interior. Once Bret switches on the Sputnik chandelier and other lights, the residence appears as a carefully appointed but unoccupied retreat: a sunken living room with high ceilings, pale and mustard furnishings, a marble fireplace, patterned floor lamps, and white shag carpeting. The refrigerator still works but is empty. Outside, the pool is full, yet the patio furniture and yellow umbrellas have been put away, leaving the yard bare and the water dark.

A Vantage Point on Susan and Robert

Bret opens the sliding doors in the master bedroom to air the room and sits on the bed, uncertain what he has come to do. His thoughts turn to Matt Kellner and Audrey Barbour, and to his belief that the people around him do not understand how dangerous Robert may be. Because Susan’s grandparents’ house is only a short drive away, Bret decides to go there.

At night he reaches their quiet cul-de-sac and sees Susan’s BMW and a white Cadillac in the driveway. The sight of Susan’s car briefly relieves his dread: it confirms she is there. Then he notices Robert’s black Porsche at the curb. Bret turns off his headlights, parks across the street, and waits in the Jaguar. The house and neighboring properties remain still as the hours pass, while Bret wonders whether Susan and Robert believe their meeting can remain undiscovered.

When Susan and Robert emerge, Robert opens the passenger door for her, then scans the neighborhood before getting into the Porsche. He does not appear to notice Bret, who waits a moment and follows them. Robert parks at La Plaza, in the middle of North Palm Canyon Drive. Bret circles the block and leaves his car at the far end of the lot, then approaches Las Casuelas Terraza on foot, keeping to the opposite sidewalk rather than passing the restaurant’s open patio. The route brings him from the concealed observation across town to the familiar public place where the couple’s secret meeting can be confronted.

Darkness and Flight

After the encounter in town, Bret returns to the house and falls asleep. A faint crash outside wakes him during the night. At first he considers whether the Santa Ana winds have knocked over one of the large, empty terra-cotta pots in the backyard. But the interior lights are out, although he remembers leaving them on, and the telephone beside the bed has no signal. The possibility of a wind-related power outage gives way to a more troubling observation: streetlamps and lights at nearby entrances are still on. The darkness is confined to the house.

Bret moves through the rooms, trying light switches without success. The familiar domestic features that made the residence seem comfortable on arrival—its rooms, doors, and electrical fittings—now offer no reassurance. In the dark, he cannot establish what has happened or whether anyone is inside. The house that had provided him a private place from which to observe others has become an uncertain space he cannot control.

Bret eventually takes his backpack and car keys and drives out of Palm Springs wearing only a T-shirt and underwear. He reaches Los Angeles at dawn. The abrupt departure leaves the disturbance unexplained, preserving the uncertainty that governs his experience of the house: there is evidence of an interruption, but no confirmed intruder or clear account of what caused it.

Narrative Significance

The house sits at the intersection of Bret’s private suspicion and his attempts to verify it. Its borrowed key, empty refrigerator, closed poolside setting, and distance from Los Angeles make it a temporary, self-contained refuge; its proximity to Susan’s grandparents’ home also enables Bret’s surveillance of Susan and Robert. The geography gives his uncertainty a practical shape: he can drive from the silent cul-de-sac to a public restaurant, but he cannot transform what he sees into a settled understanding.

The later blackout reverses the house’s function. Bret arrives seeking a place to stay while trying to make sense of the danger he associates with Robert; he leaves before dawn because the residence itself has become impossible to read. The unexplained failure of the lights and telephone echoes the book’s broader instability between observation and inference. The house does not resolve Bret’s suspicions. Instead, its brief movement from shelter to apparent threat makes his fear more immediate while leaving its cause unknown.