The Narrator’s Becoming a Writer
Breakfast at Tiffany'sThe narrator’s uncertain artistic beginnings are tested by first publication, criticism, and a growing understanding of what his writing means to him.
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Bearing strength in each event
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The First Room

A Place to Write
An Unpromising Apartment
The narrator begins in a small, gloomy room crowded with old furniture. Despite its discomfort, he values it because it is his first independent home.
A Writer’s Possibility
Books and sharpened pencils make the room feel like the beginning of a vocation. His faith in writing precedes any evidence that the work will be published.
An Unfinished Story

Reading Aloud
The Schoolteacher Tale
The narrator reads Holly a story about two schoolteachers and a broken engagement. His excitement reveals how personally he invests in the work.
A Failed Audience
Holly misunderstands its subject and says she is bored. The response wounds him and exposes the distance between his literary hopes and her tastes.
The First Acceptance

A Story Accepted
News in the Mail
A small university review accepts the narrator’s story, although it cannot pay him. He rushes to tell Holly because the possibility of print feels like a personal triumph.
Celebration Together
Holly first thinks he wants advice, then understands and celebrates. Their outing makes his modest success part of their emerging friendship.
The Birdcage Argument

Artistic Judgment
A Story Criticized
Holly calls the narrator’s published work insignificant and dismisses its subject matter. Her blunt response turns a generous friendship into a confrontation about art and value.
A Mismatched Measure
The narrator resents her judgment and nearly strikes her, then recognizes how deeply it unsettles him. They want different forms of success, and neither can persuade the other to change.
A Small Literary Future

Work Continues
Stories Sold
The narrator later has sold two stories, evidence that his writing has advanced beyond its uncertain beginning. He wishes he could share this news with Holly.
An Absent Reader
Holly’s silence leaves his success without the audience he hoped for. The continuing work becomes part of a life moving forward without the friendship that first inspired his confidence.
During the early years of the war
On the night Holly first takes refuge in his room
Monday morning in October 1943
In February, after Holly returns from her winter trip
In the months after Holly leaves New York