Hostility between Griffin Lovell and Sterling Jones
BabelHostility between Griffin Lovell and Sterling Jones is one of the book’s most consequential rivalries. It begins as a conflict over allegiance and conscience, deepens through the death of Eveline Brooke, and culminates when Griffin and Sterling shoot each other at Oxford Castle. Their enmity turns private grievance into a visible contest between competing responses to betrayal, resistance, and violence.
Origins in Eveline Brooke’s Death
The rivalry is inseparable from Eveline Brooke, whom the others discover to have died five years earlier, despite having known her as the lively student associated with the desk and the ledger of language match-pairs. Her gravestone identifies her as a beloved daughter and scholar who lived from 1813 to 1834. The discovery changes the meaning of the group’s earlier memories of her and establishes her death as a wound around which later accusations and loyalties have formed.
Griffin’s account gives the hostility its political and personal explanation. He says that he and his associates had tried for months to recruit Eveline, partly because she was close to Sterling Jones and seemed the more likely of the two to possess a conscience. Griffin believed that repeated conversations with her at the Twisted Root had finally persuaded her to join the cause. Instead, Eveline had been working with the constables and professors, performing sympathy while helping prepare a trap. Griffin describes her as an exceptionally convincing actor who asked questions under the appearance of eager commitment. His sense of having found an ally, intensified by his loneliness after losses in Burma, became a profound experience of betrayal when he learned that the alliance had been false.
Opposing Interpretations and Blame
Sterling’s hostility toward Griffin is expressed through the charge that Griffin killed Eveline. When Sterling confronts Griffin, he invokes her death as the clearest evidence of Griffin’s destructive nature, asking whether the destruction of Oxford Castle was not enough after Griffin had killed Evie. The accusation does more than recall a past crime: it places Griffin’s political violence, his willingness to destroy structures, and the loss of Eveline within a single moral judgment.
Griffin, however, rejects the simple division between innocent victim and guilty aggressor. His description makes Eveline an active participant in the attempted entrapment rather than an uninvolved bystander, while also revealing how completely he misread her performance. The resulting conflict cannot be reduced to two men competing for the same person’s loyalty. Eveline’s death exposes a chain of divided commitments: recruitment answered by infiltration, apparent sympathy answered by surveillance, and political purpose answered by lethal retaliation. Each man treats the other as the figure who embodies the betrayal he cannot accept.
The Castle Confrontation
The rivalry reaches its decisive stage during the escape from Oxford Castle. For a moment, the castle square appears deserted, with sentries distracted by flames and the high walls providing shadows. The apparent ease of escape ends when Sterling stands between Griffin, Robin Swift, and Victoire Desgraves and prevents them from reaching the gate.
Sterling arrives visibly injured: his hair is burned, his face is scratched and bloody, and dust covers his coat. He recognizes the use of the Latin word “Explōdere” and credits Griffin with having enough Latin to carry out the destruction. Griffin places himself in front of Robin Swift and Victoire Desgraves, a gesture that frames the encounter as both a personal duel and an attempt to shield others from Sterling’s violence. Sterling’s reference to Eveline makes clear that the confrontation is governed by accumulated grievance rather than immediate escape alone.
The standoff becomes a compressed contest of targets and intention. Griffin points out that there are three possible targets but only one gun, forcing Sterling to identify whom he means to shoot. Sterling implies that Griffin already knows the answer. The exchange leaves no room for reconciliation or negotiation: Griffin draws his revolver, Sterling aims at Griffin’s chest, and both fire at nearly the same instant. The shots sound like one report, and the two rivals collapse together.
Consequences of the Rivalry
The simultaneous shooting gives the conflict a grim symmetry. Neither man simply defeats the other, and neither survives the confrontation untouched. Griffin is found with a wet, spreading patch of blood over his left shoulder, while Sterling also falls. Robin Swift immediately tries to assess whether Griffin’s shoulder wound is fatal and searches for a means of helping him. Griffin’s attempt to direct attention to the front pocket of his coat shows that even in the immediate aftermath, information and an object remain important to the escape and to the wider struggle.
The scene also makes the rivalry costly to everyone around it. Victoire Desgraves screams, Robin Swift drops beside Griffin, and the escape is transformed into an emergency. The hostility between Griffin and Sterling therefore does not remain a contained feud: it interrupts the movement of the entire group, places Robin Swift and Victoire Desgraves in danger, and converts a politically charged confrontation into a scene of blood, panic, and uncertain survival.
Narrative Significance
Griffin and Sterling are connected by more than mutual dislike. Their relationship is structured by competing judgments about Eveline, by incompatible ideas of political loyalty, and by the difficulty of distinguishing resistance from destruction once violence has become the governing language. Griffin sees betrayal in Eveline’s false recruitment and treats Sterling as part of the world that has turned against him. Sterling sees Griffin’s actions, especially in relation to Eveline and the castle, as proof that Griffin’s cause has become indistinguishable from brutality.
The rivalry’s ending preserves that moral tension rather than resolving it. Their shared gunfire produces no clear victor and no final explanation capable of restoring Eveline’s life or repairing the divided loyalties that led to her death. By making Griffin and Sterling fall in the same instant, the narrative presents their hostility as a destructive mutual entanglement: each man aims at the other, yet the consequences spread outward to the people attempting to escape and to the larger political conflict surrounding them.