Narrator's bank robbery and escape
CherryThe narrator's bank robbery and escape is an improvised crime carried out with practiced restraint: he enters openly armed, takes cash from a teller, and tries to walk away without drawing attention. Its decisive turn comes after the bank, when Black is missing from the rendezvous and the narrator must conceal both a loaded gun and money spilling from his pockets. Sirens approach before the account confirms whether he gets away; what it does confirm is that, at the sound of them, he feels at peace.
The Disguise and the Threat
The narrator waits outside wearing an Indians cap, a red scarf, a blue hood, a buttoned white shirt, ordinary jeans, and white Adidas shoes. The gun is at his waist. He pulls the scarf over the lower half of his face as he passes the cash machines, though he doubts the gesture can do much: he has been robbing banks long enough that people know his face. When a man leaves the branch, the narrator goes to the door, enters without apparent anxiety, and draws the gun so everyone can see it.
His announcement that he is wanted and will be killed is, he explains, a joke, and he thinks the people inside understand that. The joke does not make the robbery less real: he still needs money before leaving. The narrator approaches the counter with the pistol held at arm’s length and pointed at the floor, judging that there is no need to make the threat more aggressive than it already is. The contrast between the visible weapon and its deliberately lowered aim establishes the scene’s method: intimidation, but with an effort to keep the encounter from escalating.
The Teller and the Cash
The narrator describes bank robberies through his own cynical generalizations about tellers. In his account, most are women, and he estimates that roughly 80 percent respond calmly if the robber is not rude; the remaining 20 percent react badly. He recalls one teller who resembled Janet Reno and refused to hand over more than $1,800, apparently convinced that the bank was entitled to withhold the rest even if people were shot. The story presents this as an exception to the narrator’s usual experience, not as a rule about how every teller responds.
He says that tellers usually pass him a message or are told directly that the visit is a robbery, then open the cash drawers and set money on the counter. To him, the exchange can feel almost civil, like a silent joke shared between robber and teller. He believes people do not expect him to do anything serious if the situation worsens, so he makes a point of trying to look at least somewhat deranged. He thinks his visible sadness otherwise makes him look weak; the performance risks making him appear both crazy and cowardly. His concern even extends to the teller’s possible consequences at work: he imagines her manager blaming her for handing over the money and firing her, with the loss reaching her family at Christmas.
At this branch, the teller and narrator recognize one another. About a month earlier, during another robbery in Lakewood on the West Side, a different teller had put $1,400 on the counter and claimed there was nothing more. The narrator recognized from her voice that she was lying, but says he did not care: he did not want all the money in the branch, only enough to get by immediately. The woman now present had been there for that earlier robbery, making the encounter less anonymous than the narrator’s routine might suggest. When she asks his name, he answers by calling her Vanessa. She quickly empties the cash drawers, and he takes the piles from the counter and stuffs them into his pockets.
A Walk Meant to Look Ordinary
The narrator knows there is a police station about four hundred metres away and does not intend to linger. He treats the robbery like breaking a shop window or pickpocketing: the important thing is getting away, and getting away depends on moving quickly. Yet once outside, he does not run immediately. He rounds the corner by the cash machines, passes behind the bank, goes by a dumpster and the base of a building where he once lived, then descends the stairs behind a nearly vegetarian restaurant toward a fence and a parking lot.
Black is not there. The narrator says he is not surprised, dismissing the absence as typical dealer behavior. His car is parked a street away, so he decides he can reach it on foot. The parking lot is exposed on three sides to walls full of windows, and he has to manage the gun as well as his appearance. He removes his cap and puts the heavy, fully loaded weapon inside it, an awkward arrangement he accepts because he does not want the gun dragging his trousers down while he walks away. As he crosses the lot, he carries the cap in his left hand and removes his scarf, rolling it up and laying it over the gun to conceal it better.
The disguise is now imperfect in another way: cash protrudes from his pockets, and he has to take care not to drop any. He turns onto Hampshire Road and continues toward his car, aware that police may arrive from Mayfield and that being caught would leave him in serious trouble. An approaching man is dressed, in the narrator’s assessment, like an old man. He hopes this means the stranger will not care what he is doing. The immediate task is to pass without acting like someone who has just robbed a bank.
Sirens and an Unresolved Escape
The escape is measured in distance and delay. The narrator has covered three quarters of the way and allows himself the possibility that he might get away. Then he hears sirens. They turn the corner and come closer, transforming the walk from a controlled attempt to appear ordinary into an encounter with the consequences he has been anticipating. The account does not establish whether he reaches the car or escapes arrest; it stops with the sirens audible.
The last reversal is emotional rather than practical. When the sirens sound, the narrator says he feels at peace. That calm follows the exposure of the robbery, the missing rendezvous, the clumsy concealment of the loaded gun, and the cash still bulging from his pockets. The scene therefore closes without resolving the chase: its final certainty is the narrator’s response to danger, not the outcome of the getaway.


